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    Posted: 08/August/2007 at 07:22
...and I thought I'd share it. I don't know how long ago I wrote it, but I just wrote it after I woke up in the middle of the night. Anyways, here t is.
"I have looked back upon this
This life full opf shit
The one I've lived for so long
Now, I'm dead and done"
And I've wondered why
My wounds were left uncured
Why you left me uninsured
And then I think about the days
I've spent here rotting away
And I've wondered through this phase
Drifting away, fading away
And I've thought about how I've not changed
Still stinging, still breathing
"And now that you've left me
I've been given plenty of time
To think about the moments
We have passed by..."
And I'm laying here flat on the ground
Striped, misplaced, broken away
And I'm getting fixed again
Back into place, many more days...
I'll be waiting, I'll be waiting
I'll be waiting, I'll be waiting
And I still feel you touching me
Fade away, out of place
"I'll be waiting for the day i may lie here and rest
And enjoy my rotting away"
Here's another one I wrote, last night.
I've now lost most of my friends
Mostly the ones that said "until the end"
They want me to act alive
But that's hard when you're dead inside
And now that I've come so close
I'm starting to miss me the most
So, I cry each and every time
And I'd die to see what it's like
To feel normal inside
To feel like I have not yet died
To feel like most
To feel like I haven't come close
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Those are both really well written, Punk. I think the second one gives a definite insight into who you are and how you feel at the moment.
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